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The Psychology of Numbers in PPC Ads

What’s more effective — “20-50% off” or use “up to 50% off?”

vs.

According to Marketing Experiments‘ Dr. Flint McLaughlin, whenever you use an X-Y range in your ad, most people will revert to the first number as the mean (average) standard. In other words, on a range of 35-50%, one will assume that 50% off is the exception, and most items are 35% off. (Slide 18 of PPC Live Optimization Clinic replay)

Based on his research and experience, Dr. McLaughlin suggests using “up to [your best discount]” to achieve higher click through.

Likewise, “over 50% off” is not as persuasive as “up to 75% off”:

Of course with dollar-pricing, you would want to choose your lowest reference point - “from $70″ rather than “$70-$150″:

Beyond Click Through

Click through rate is not the be-all end-all of your PPC campaign. Conversion rates are also very important. When I worked at a shoe store we often had sales sections with “UP to 50% OFF!” signage. Despite ticketed prices, customers often assumed everything was 50% off. Many got very frustrated and felt cheated that only certain shoes were 50% off. Most were 20% off. These customers who have grown skeptical of “up to” offers may not respond to such ads as those who haven’t been disappointed by them before.

I think in some cases, providing a range could attract more qualified clicks and reduce site abandonment and disappointment. Those that find 20% off an attractive offer will click through and may be pleasantly surprised with your 50% off deals, but won’t demand them. Dr. McLaughlin says “clarity trumps persuasion,” and I believe clarity also improves conversion.

Deterring Unqualified Buyers

Including the exact price of your item, even if it’s not a bargain, is effective as it weeds out those who would bounce off your page when shown the price.

Just remember to triple and quadruple check your ad and landing page for consistency - the price promised in your ad must match the offer.

Don’t Make Them Think

Numbers can be attention-grabbing, but also confusing. Don’t turn your special offer into a question:

Punctuation is your friend. Say this sentence out loud: “Order $50 Free Ground Shipping”

If you’ve seen that Simpson’s episode where lawyer Lionel Hutz adds ? , and ! to his business card, you know that “Works on contingency. No money down.” can become “Works on contingency? No, money down!”

Better copy would read “Free Ground Shipping on Orders Over $50,” “Spend $50, Get Free Shipping” or even “Free Shipping Over $50 Purchase.”

Clarify what prices are for:

Is there a $2.97 charge to access the database? Is this a one time fee? Is this a typo? Do other sites charge this? Huh?

Don’t make customer beg for the discount, or jot down some complicated code:

Your landing page should show the price or discount you promise. The customer should not have to mention or ask for anything. Affiliates, if you must use a coupon code, make it easy to remember like SUMMER and show it on the landing page.

Numbers can be effective, but as these examples show, you must consider the thought processes of the searcher before you write your copy.

9 Privacy Policy Usability Tips

After realizing I’ve never covered privacy policies here in much depth, I thought it would make a decent blog topic. I sat down to brainstorm a list of what would make for privacy policy usability. What I usually do is go hunting for examples from a variety of online retailers to illustrate the best-practices.

To my surprise, after checking out a handful of sites, I found one e-tailer that covered all the bases - eToys.

Privacy Policy Links

Link from footer - Linking to privacy policies from the footer menu is a convention, meaning enough sites do it this way and it’s likely that a customer will look there first when they want to access the privacy policy. Some sites hide the policy behind “Customer Service” or “FAQ” links, but that reduces the chances customers will find it quickly, if at all.

Link from anywhere you ask for registration - (create account, email sign up etc) to reduce friction and increase opt-ins.

Email Signup:

Account Creation:

You may also want to read: Registration Usability - Permission Email Dos and Donts

Checkout - eToys maintains a footer menu throughout the checkout process along with other important policies.

Privacy Policy Copy

FAQ style bookmark links - Most privacy policies are ridiculously long. Bookmark links give the reader an overview of what you’re talkin’ ’bout, and the ability to jump directly to what they want to know.

Show trust badges and seals prominently - If you’ve paid for these seals to boost trust and conversions, why not leverage them on your privacy page too?

Bold headlines and sub-headlines - Nice and easy to scan.

Plain English, mixed case - THERES NOTHING WORSE THAN 459 LINES OF LEGALESE, IN ALL CAPS. IT HAPPENS. IT SHOULDN’T. LIGHT GRAY TEXT SUCKS TOO.

Visitor surveys - Sometimes websites will invite visitors to complete a satisfaction survey, like 4Q. It’s a good idea to add a link to the privacy policy in the pop-up window or a few sentences of how you respect their privacy. No eToys example for this one.

Got any other tips for privacy policy usability? Please leave a comment.

Nofollow Attributes

Another tip is to add “nofollow” attributes to Privacy Policy links to improve your SEO. If this is all Geek to you, check out a post from that discusses Page Rank sculpting.

D-I-Y Privacy Policies

The Privacy Policy Generator is a great tool for DIY’ers. It asks you to check off what kinds of information you collect, how you use cookies and so on.

Hope this helps you out with your privacy policy usability.

Using Buzzillions to Brainstorm Personas

To follow up on yesterday’s post on using customer reviews to improve product descriptions, which recommends you use Buzzillions‘ Review Snapshot feature to scan the pros, cons and best uses of products as reported by customers…

Buzzillions has another cool feature you can use to brainstorm customer personas.

Simply navigate to a product category that you carry, and check out the “See Reviews From These Types of Users” box.

Examples:

Golf

Retail Store Supplies

GPS Devices

To get inside your persona’s head, you can scan reviews and pick out the ones written by type of customer (unfortunately you can’t just view reviews by customer type once you click through, rather you see all the reviews):

You can then apply your customer insight to product pages, email campaigns, buyer guides and other marketing activities.

*Want more information on personas? Check out FutureNow’s GrokDotCom and the Invesp blog, or check out our webinars 7 Simple Ways to Improve Your Holiday Conversion Rate and Jon Stewart or Oprah: What’s Your Website Personality?

Improving Product Descriptions Using Competitor Customer Reviews

Customer reviews certainly help shoppers, but they are not substitutes for weak or generic product descriptions. Unique product descriptions help your search engine optimization, help overcome your customer FUDDs and ultimately sell more product!

I want to share a few tips for creating unique, compelling product page copy using customer review content - even when your site has few or no reviews.

Death to Stock Manufacturer Product Descriptions

SEO and Duplicate Content

Our example is the “LeapFrog Fridge Phonics Magnetic Set.” This product is carried by most toy retailers, and many are just using the stock product description from the manufacturer:

Your fridge door is the perfect place to develop a taste for reading. Nobody goes hungry for learning with this set of 26 colorful easy-grip magnetic letters and magnetic letter reader that attaches securely to your fridge. Each letter talks, sings and teaches letter names, letter sounds and learning songs. Put a letter into the reader to hear its name, its sound or a fun phonics song. Your kids might not eat their vegetables, but with the Fridge Phonics Magnetic Set they can learn to spell them. What it Teaches: * Letter names * Letter sounds * Learning songs

Nothing wrong with the description itself, it’s actually very clever. But typing “Your fridge door is the perfect place to develop a taste for reading” into Google delivers 1,520 results, which tells us Google has indexed that many pages using this phrase. The danger to sites using stock descriptions is they may not appear in search results due to the duplicate content filter.

Writing a unique description, or at least modifying it so it’s not word-for-word is a better approach, especially to capture long-tail search traffic.

Address Fears, Uncertainties, Doubts and Deal-breakers

Manufacturer’s descriptions are typically written before the product is sold to the general public. Copywriters don’t necessarily have enough customer research to answer these questions:

  • Who buys this item and why?

  • Did the product live up to expectations?
  • How long did the product last?
  • What unexpected uses do customers discover for the product?
  • What’s the worse thing about this product?
  • Would the customer recommend it to people like themselves?

But you have access to free market research that addresses these concerns - customer reviews. Plus, you can identify common FUDDs - fears, uncertainties, doubts and dealbreakers that can help you write more persuasive copy, establish trust with customers and convert comparison shoppers - even if yours is not the lowest price.

How to Use Customer Reviews to Improve Product Copy

Start with your featured products, best sellers, highest margin or seasonal products.

Custom copywriting does take time, especially when you’re performing thorough customer research by reading a number of reviews. Choose items you expect will get most mileage for your time investment.

Tip: Check out Amazon’s Bestseller lists by navigating to any category and clicking the Bestsellers link!

Tap into the largest customer review bases for each product.

This could be Amazon, Epinions, Rate-it-All or any other review community. You might want to Google the product itself “{product} + reviews” and start with the first result.

I like using Amazon because I’ve found it not only has a large number of reviews, but the review quality is usually very good. There are great sort tools to help you hone in by star-rating, rank by most-helpful or even search within reviews for keywords. I do find the search feature’s precision to be lacking. If you want to find reviews with the phrase “would not recommend this for” it will match single words, and plurals / alternate endings for the word “recommend.”

Example: Using our LeapFrog Fridge Phonics Magnetic Set as our case, here’s how you can leverage Amazon…

From the product page, scroll, scroll and scroll some more until you find the “See All Product Description” link.

Hello! This product has won some awards.

  • Oppenheim Toy Portfolio, Gold Seal and Snap Award, 2003

  • Parenting 2003 Toys of the Year Award
  • Toy Wishes All Star, Preschool Category, 2003
  • Toy of the Year, Nick Jr.com, 2003

These are strong value propositions. Use this to your advantage in home page merchandising zones, PPC copy, email marketing as well as product page copy.

You won’t necessarily find awards for every product, but who knows what gems you’ll find.

Read reviews.

You don’t have to read ALL the reviews, just a handful of reviews voted most helpful buy the community and a few of the lowest rated. As you scan, clip quotes that stand out to you. Look for:

  • Product strengths: “What I love most about this is that because it is magnetic, we do not seem to lose them unlike the wooden puzzle ones my 8 year old used when he was younger.”

  • Benefits to the owner, gift giver or secondary users: “It’s great that it’s in the kitchen too so I can cook or clean while she plays.”
  • Unexpected uses: “…you can use your washer and/or dryer. We do a lot of learning while I do laundry.”
  • Natural cross-sell or upsell opportunities: “Since any magnet can damage your TV, VCR, and other electronic devices, we purchased a large magnetic board for her room, and that helps us encourage her to keep her magnetic items in there.”
  • Cautions: “WARNING about the magnet. Keep at least 6″ away from pacemakers, and avoid contact with magnetic computer media, including floppy disks, Zip disks, removable Hard Disk Drives, Televisions, and Computer Video Monitors, other magnetic media including credit cards, ID badges…”

Pay closest attention to negative reviews.

Should you discover (as in this example) that the product is often defective, you need to address this both in your copy and in your selling policies.

Are you willing and able to offer the assurance of free return shipping on defective products? It could be the deciding factor on whether a comparison shopper chooses you or your competition. You could add copy like:

“Though most customers are extremely satisfied with this item, a small percentage of customers report the product does not play the correct letter sounds for some letters. In the event that your product does not work as expected, we will gladly offer free return shipping and send you a new set.”

Use Buzzillions.com

Buzzillions is a popular customer reviews aggregator from the folks at Power Reviews. One feature it has that I haven’t found elsewhere is a “Review Snapshot” that gives you a list of Pros, Cons and Best Uses as mentioned by customers.

Under the pros tab you’ll find fantastic adjectives to use in your copy.
The cons tab lists fears you must address in your copy, or gives you ideas for cross-sells. Hard to clean? Suggest a cleaner. No storage container? Suggest a suitable container.
Best uses helps you develop “Recommended For” copy. You can also add these products to the appropriate gift finder tools, or add product tags if your site uses them.

You may discover different ways of gleaning from customer reviews than the ones mentioned here. The takeaway here is that you tap into the consumer conversation that’s freely available to you, and consider how you can leverage it to improve your product copy. If you want to take this to the next level and use customer reviews to market to the sexes, check out Holly Buchanan’s post Using Customer Reviews to Pick Up Men, Women.

Cart Abandonment: Nipping FUDDs in the Bud

Elmer Fudd With GunWhat are FUDDs? We’re not talking about wabbit-hunters or the beer of choice in Shelbyville. FUDDs are fears, uncertainties, doubts and deal breakers that influence consumers’ purchase decisions. How you address them can have a huge impact on your conversion rates.

PayPal and ComScore recently conducted a study on shopping cart abandonment and discovered customers’ top reasons were

  • Shipping charges too high - 43%

  • Total cost of purchase more expensive than anticipated - 36%
  • Wanted to comparison shop at other Web sites before making a purchase - 27%
  • Could not contact customer support to answer questions - 16%
  • Forgot usernames and passwords for store accounts - 14%

Though it ranks third, I believe the key here is “wanted to comparison shop at other websites before making a purchase.” If a customer has true purchase intent (not just browsing or running out the clock at work), if you don’t ease the FUDDs, he or she is going to find a wabbit (e-store) that does.

Free Shipping - King of Counter-FUDDs

44% of shoppers surveyed by the e-Tailing Group’s research in late 2006 reported they typically compare 3 stores when making a decision, and 84% cited free shipping as “very to most influential” when buying gifts online. It could very well be a dealbreaker between buying from you or a competitor.

So online stores that offer free shipping have an advantage over stores that don’t, right? Not unless the free shipping message gets through to the customer.

Example: I Googled “Jack Lalanne juicer free shipping” and found several products:

I hate to say this is among the worst product pages I have ever seen. Aside from the large block of text and the absence of a buy button, this page actually ranked above the other examples in organic search. As a customer who typed in “jack lalanne juicer free shipping” I expect free shipping and I’m going to hunt for the free shipping information, which you might spot if you have a keen eye:

But what if I came through a comparison shopping engine and had 6 open tabs from different retailers and I was comparison shopping? Would I notice this value proposition? Why is it not in my face near the price and add to cart button?

GNC’s got it right. Free shipping is clearly placed between the price and cart button in a bold, red type. It even assures you the item is in stock.

Walgreens’ incentive is off to the side and easier to miss.

Wal-Mart’s is a bit closer to the call-to-action, but the text link is not as prominent. Again, easier to overlook when a comparison shopper is flipping between online stores.

Overstock has $2.95 shipping which is almost free, especially since it often has very low prices to begin with. Overstock shows the offer at the top of the page above the navigation but not in the content area is not optimal. It’s a good idea to have this value proposition in both areas.

Can you see Kohl’s free shipping offer? Wouldn’t it be easier to see under the price?

You could also include the free shipping offer mid-product description:

Free Shipping on Steroids

As more online retailers jump on the free shipping boat, “free overnight shipping” and “free return shipping” have become the value-added incentives. Again, the key is to flaunt the value proposition whenever possible.

Endless.com offers free overnight shipping and wisely communicates this on product category pages…

…but “drops the shoe” on the product page! Search engine or shopping engine traffic might land right on the product page. Now’s the time to shove your value proposition in the customer’s face. And if PPC ads mention “free overnight shipping,” this landing page has lost its scent.

Pre-Checkout Calculators - Queen of Counter-FUDDs

A customer who add an item to cart from a product page only to experience “sticker shock” in the checkout process likely wouldn’t have added to cart had the full price been shown pre-checkout. That’s why shipping estimator and tax tools are very effective for reducing cart abandonment and improving your site’s usability. Even if you offer free shipping, unless you offer it on everything (no purchase threshold or restrictions on international orders), you should have a pre-checkout tax and shipping calculator.

Know What You’re Up Against

A beneficial exercise is to search for a product you carry and check out competitors’ offers and compare them to yours. Or grab a few people off the street and do an old-fashioned usability test, asking them to pretend they need to buy a certain product, and show them you and 5 competitors (in open tabs). Ask them who they’d buy from and why. You may gain insight into how your shipping offers fare against others, or how effectively you’re communicating your value propositions.

PPC Split Testing: Reducing Risk When Testing New Ads Against Control

Testing New PPC AdsThis is the final installment of our PPC copywriting series. Part one discussed the importance of unique selling propositions in ad copy to communicate why a customer should buy from you rather than competitors. We followed this up with strategies for continual ad copy split testing. Today’s post assumes you’ve found a clear winning ad by testing one variable at a time, and you now want to test it against radically different copy.

I learned of this tip through a fantastic free video from Stompernet explaining the AdWords Triangulation Method (38:50 minutes through the video).

Here’s the danger in testing a winning ad (as your control) against experimental copy - if your new creative is a dud, you could lose 25-50% of your click through rate potential if your ads are showing evenly, depending on how many ads you’re testing.

A smarter approach recommended by Stompernet is to create 4 identical copies of your control ad, and one test ad. This ensures that your “safe” ad will show 80% of the time, and your test ad only 20%. Plus, the control ad’s solid click through history will cause it to rank at higher positions than brand new ads, so creating new copies reduces this bias.

I think you could also pause the control ad, and create 4 new copies to eliminate the bias altogether. But it’s nice to have one copy that’s going to achieve better positions at lower click through rates, especially if you’re continually testing. If you can tolerate more risk, you could create just one copy of your control so you’re running 3 ads - 66% of the time you’re running your control copy, 33% of the time you’re getting higher positions and lower CPC from the click through history of the established ad, and 33% is your experimental ad. Then you can segment out the control ad with the history to compare performance of your control copy vs. new copy, without the ranking bias.

PPC Copywriting: The Evolution of a PPC Split Test

Spoof Adwords AdYesterday we talked about persuasive copywriting for PPC ads, and as promised, today we’re going to talk about strategies for split testing ads.

I’ve heard most PPC experts recommend you test headlines first, because they are most visible and are believed to influence click through rate more than body copy (because people have a tendency not to read things if they don’t have to). But I’m going to go against the gurus and suggest how you could test offers and value propositions first, using a hypothetical campaign for “wireless headphones.”

The Strategy

This approach uses Dynamic Keyword Insertion in headlines for your first few rounds of testing. You have more room to market yourself in ad copy than in the headline. You can test offers, calls to action, value propositions — copy that answers the question “why should I buy from your site?”

Dynamic Keyword Insertion means Google will match your headline to the searcher’s query. If Jimmy searches for “wireless head phones” or “cordless headphones” the ad would adjust itself accordingly for maximum relevance so long as that keyword is in your Ad Group and fits in the headline. If Jimmy searches “I’m looking for killer wireless headphones” (a long tail term), as long as “wireless headphones” is broad or phrase matched, a default keyword would display as the headline. In this case, simply “wireless headphones.” You’ll see an example of how to use this feature in the first screenshot, or read more in Google’s DKI tutorial.

But we’re not going to use keyword insertion in the ad text - there’s no need to keyword stuff. We want as much space for testing compelling offers, not redundant keywords. It’s not SEO, it’s not the year 2001 and we speak English here. Here’s an example of totally useless keyword repetition (real ad):

Keyword Stuffed PPC Ad

Alright, let’s get started with a hypothetical example of 5 rounds of PPC ad testing:

Round 1

First you’re going to pick 2-4 versions of an ad to run evenly against each other.

Headline: Use DKI for your headline

Ad Copy Line 2: Make sure you have your best unique value proposition included in the ad. I recommend using it as your second line, and using the top line as your testing line. A unique value proposition is the most compelling strength or offer you as a retailer have that sets you apart. If you offer free shipping, free returns, flat-rate shipping, no hassle returns, money back guarantees, have won awards, or anything else that builds trust or adds value - use it!

Ad Copy Line 1: Here’s where you microtest your ad. Many tests have found including numbers - whether a price, percentage or otherwise makes your ad stand out and improves click through. If you offer low prices, it may make your ad more attractive than others. If you want to deter bargain shoppers, a higher price can save you money on clicks and improve your conversion rate. You could here test price vs. non-price, but for this example, we’re going to test variations of showing a price.

Display URL: Some advertisers use dynamic keyword insertion at the end of the display URL (so long as it fits) to boost the keyword relevance, and it may or may not improve click through. An argument could be made that shorter URLs have higher click through. Also, www and non-www URLs may be tested. You really need to test this yourself, but not in round one. If you have too many variables in your testing, you won’t know whether it’s the ad text or the display URL that’s performing better.

In round one, we’re going to use www URLs for every ad variation, with capitalization, as there has been many studies that do suggest this gets higher click through. Since I want to play it safe here, we’re going to always use capitalization in every round.

Okay, here are the ads we’re starting off with - but there’s an error, can you spot it?

Round 1 Testing

Answer: We’re testing pricing offers, so we want all else to be identical. We can test “name brands” in a later round.

Don’t forget to edit your campaign settings and select “show ads more evenly” so you can properly split-test.

Now we get to make up some results. Let’s say that “$29.99 and Up” had low click through rate of 0.41%, but the other two versions had 3.0% and 3.72%. And let’s assume a quick check with SplitTester.com’s confidence tool declared “From $29.99″ the statistical winner. Before you decide it’s a winner, make sure that it also has a good conversion rate - that these clicks end up buying. You don’t want to pick an ad only costs you money and doesn’t make you any.

If you have an ad that rocks click through rate AND conversion rate, you can move on to round 2.

Round 2

Pause the ads that didn’t “win,” and let’s ad new ads to test. If you delete your ads, you’ll never be able to see their history again.

Now I want to know the impact of URL versions as follows:

Round 2 Testing

I’m going to pretend that the non-www, non-trailing keyword version performed best. On to round 3…

Round 3

I’m trying out more creative copy in the first line. I want to know what seems to be most compelling about wireless headphones. Is it range and clarity of sound? Is it better bass? Is it cool styles? Are name brands important?

Round 3 Testing

OK, again, totally arbitrary - let’s assume the test resulted in “Stylish, Wicked Bass” as the winning creative. Can this be further tweaked?

Round 4

Round 4 Testing

At this point (or in any round), there might not be a clear winner. You might want to keep testing different micro-variations until you get a definite star ad before you move onto the next round - testing headlines. Or, you might decide that they’re all performing decent and you can choose one you like best and move on to the next stage.

Round 5

Now I’m ready to test headlines. There are common modifiers PPC advertisers will use in headlines - the ones I’ve seen most are:

  • unique

  • discount
  • cool
  • cheap
  • find
  • buy
  • compare
  • on sale
  • sale
  • save on
  • for less
  • get
  • need [keyword]?
  • reviews
  • [brand] [keyword]
  • [keyword] [country]

You might want to try these, but remember that once you add the bargain hunter modifiers, you could attract clicks you don’t want (that’s why including price, even if higher than competitors helps). But definitely avoid testing different brand names. Unless they are doing specific branded search, you don’t want to use brand names in your headline. It makes your selection seem too restricted like you only offer one brand (less selection) or you have made a decision for them. Unless the searcher is familiar with the brand, it’s not effective. Your branded products should have their own Ad Groups, anyway.

If you’ve had a clear winning ad copy in previous rounds, you might want to inject these words into your headline, or try your unique value proposition in the headline, like “$0 Shipping” to stand out. Just make sure you’re not wasting ad copy by repeating your offer again in the lines of text. And use your dynamic keyword insertion headline as the “control” version - you want to see if headline variations outperform it.

Here’s an example test, can you spot the error?

Round 5 Testing

If you noticed that one of the ads does not have “wireless headphones” in the ad text or headline, you’re correct. You don’t want to sacrifice keyword relevance for catchy headlines. Double check your ad text, it’s easy to forget the details.

Conclusion

Again, there are many ways you can approach your testing, this is just an example of how you could go about it. This strategy involves testing micro-changes. You can also test really different copy against each other. Tomorrow we’re going to show you how to reduce your risk when doing such tests.

Until tomorrow, here are the key points:

1. Keep testing. You can always “beat the control” - so long as you keep trying.
2. Don’t test more than one variable at a time.
3. Use your unique value propositions whenever you can.
4. Use prices when it makes sense, or other numbers.
5. Use SplitTester.com to check if your test has produced a winner or not.
6. Don’t make your decision based on click through rate alone. Make sure the ad converts.
7. Capitalize The First Letters of Your Words And URLs, It Is A Proven Strategy.
8. Avoid using brand names in headlines unless your ad group and landing page are targeted to only that brand.
9. Triple check your work for spelling and other errors. Make sure your landing pages are tied up correctly.
10. Keep reading Get Elastic for more tips for online marketing. Subscribe if you haven’t already!

PPC Advertising: Are You Selling Yourself In Your Ads?

PPC Rockstar CopyWith PPC, unless you’ve tapped into niche long-tail keywords your search ads compete with 20 other links per search result page (organic and paid ads) - or even more if you count Google Maps or Google Shopping results.

And often the products and offers are so similar between retailers, what makes a shopper ultimately buy is which retailer he or she prefers.

That’s why you should include some statement that explains why someone should buy from you in your ad copy. You’re not just selling the product, you are selling yourself as a retailer. Most ads don’t do this at all, they just focus on the product.

What if Ads Were Ranked By Persuasion?

Let’s have a look at search ads for “coffee mugs.” If you search for this and refresh the page a few times, you’ll notice results bounce around quite a bit (we’ll explain why this is later). The left screenshot is how Google really ranked the ads when I performed the search, and the right side how I would rank the ads by effectiveness.

Results by GoogleResults if Ranked By Persuasion

Now let’s deconstruct the ads:

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Welcome Email Usability Tips for Online Retailers

The Second Annual Retail Welcome Benchmark Study put out by Premiere Global Services and the Email Experience Council recently examined the subscription practices of 118 of the largest etailers. The study reports that 72% of the major online retailers send welcome emails immediately after a customer signs up for an email subscription.

Being curious, I decided to conduct my own welcome-email research using the 100-some retailers on our Shopping Cart Buttons List. I wanted to test how many welcome emails I’d get and examine their content. But rather than signing up for email subscriptions, I registered for a customer account on each site. I also specifically opted-out of email promotions to make sure each welcome email was in response to the registration. The registration process itself was quite enlightening, and I will be reporting my usability observations in an upcoming post.

I was able to successfully register for 89 accounts and received 33 welcome emails within 24 hours, or 37%. After reading each one I took a tally of how many emails used different tactics such as:

1. Branding in Headline: 88%

It’s a good idea to include your company name in the sender field, the subject line or both. If the customer wants to spot your email among all the rest, you want to help them find it faster. Because some customers may scan either the “Sender ID” or “Subject,” it’s best to include your name in both. Be sure to configure your outgoing email so “Your Name” appears instead of customerservice@yourname.com as this also makes for easiest scanning. I don’t see any reason not to put a company name in the subject line, and found I Delia’s “It’s time to log in” subject a bit bizarre…

screenshot of email subject lines

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Copywriting for better online retail SEO

DM News published an article titled ‘Copywriting for better online retail SEO‘ by Elastic Path’s VP Marketing (and search enthusiast) Jason Billingsley in their March 30 2007 online edition.

Anyone who has chatted with Jason at a trade show or other event quickly learns that he is passionate about search engine optimization and enhancing usability to increase conversions. Show him your site and, after a quick and calculated look, he’ll rattle off a dozen tips and tricks which will increase your site visibility resulting in more (cheap) organic hits allowing you to reduce spend on (often expensive) Pay Per Click ads while maintaining or increasing your traffic levels.

No, Google is not too worried ;-), but your competition will be worried if you study Jason’s tips and follow them.

Anyhow, the article hands out a big concept which is basically a new way of looking at something you are already doing for your site - writing words. The gist of Jason persuasive case is ‘write how your customers search.’

People search similarly to how they speak. The content created should match closely to the content sought and, therefore, will rank toward the top of the search engine results page.

I find watching people use search engines remarkable due to the words they use to search - more often than not, casual phrases and conversational snippets are the norm rather than one-off, specific word strings like found in a products’ technical specifications.

Jason sets up an example of this:

For example, a typical description of a sheet set may read as follows: ‘100 percent cotton, 300-thread count, cross-woven machine washable.’ However, the product will be much more findable, and will rank higher in organic searches, if the name and description contained the same language searchers are using.

The shopper would respond much better to this: ‘These winter white soft bedsheets will whisk you off to a comfortable dreamland every night. No other luxury bedding will make your bedroom as regal as the Queen Collection’s 300-thread count, 100 percent cotton sheet set. The only trouble with a luxurious, warm and comfortable set of sheets like this is having to get out of your dream bed each morning.’

As you see, these words are more persuasive and contain sets of phrases shoppers are actually looking for: white soft bedsheets, luxury bedding, cotton sheet set, comfortable set of sheets, dream bed.

So when writing your descriptions, commit the time and energy to doing it right. Think ti through and write a little story for each product. This seems like a lot of work and it is. Writing isn’t necessarily easy and writing well takes practice and well, … time.

As such, seek advice from experienced writers (freelance if needed) and absolutely talk to people outside of your vertical universe. Talk to your nieces, grandmothers and neighbors to find out how they talk about your type of goods (ergo: a ‘couch’ to one person is a ’sofa’ to another and a ‘chesterfield’ to someone else). Make sure to get out of your company echo chamber where everyone uses and understands the same industry jargon and parlance. By doing so, you’ll find fresh insight into the ways customers search for what you have. By doing so, you’ll attract more qualified buyers, more cheaply.

Make more + Spend less = Great Success! Start by reading Jason’s tips.